So I had a fakebook friend check out the profile, and give me some advice. I was too open and honest, and revealed everything there was to know about me. Be short. Be curt. Be coy.
Done, done, and done. I did a quick fix, but will revise it further later on today.
External direction is what I needed on this. I can't see these things myself anymore.
IN THE MEANTIME, still nothing happening. There was a bit of a chain happening with a woman in Etobicoke, but she clearly was doing a placeholder thing, so I dropped it. It's astonishing how many women plead for guys to actually read their profile. I do, and ask questions based on it, but a) there's not often a lot there to hook a conversation on, which leads to b) we'd both rather be talking about something else. Frustrating.
It's still weird to see your facebook and fakebook friends on OKC. Colliding of worlds thing. The fakebook friends I am OK with, as there's still a degree of anonymity, but for facebook, I can't get out of there fast enough, hoping they never saw me.